The Blood Element - My VA fanfic

Okay so I've been working on this fic forever now, and tonight I've finally posted it on fanfic.net. I wanted to include a link here for you guys because I spend so much time on here, and I wanted you to be among the first to read it.
It's still in progress, but I plan to have more chapters up eventually. For now, there is chapter one (and the prologue, but that barely counts as a chapter ).

The title of my fic is The Blood Element and it is about two original characters I've created in the VA world. I hope you all enjoy!!

And here's the link to the fic:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6198767/1/The_Blood_Element

If you love it, feel free to leave reviews either on here or on fanfic.net.

I must say I rather like the idea. Of course there are dhampirs who aren't as perfect in what they do as Rose is and I'm looking forward to reading more of Eden's story And your writing style is great, really enjoyable. Update soon

Phoenix wrote:

I must say I rather like the idea. Of course there are dhampirs who aren't as perfect in what they do as Rose is and I'm looking forward to reading more of Eden's story And your writing style is great, really enjoyable. Update soon

OMG *dances a happy dance*

lol Sorry for that. It's just this is my first review for this fic and I'm super happy that it's such a nice one!! Thank you!!
There will be more chapters... I just can't say when because after ch2... none of them are written. But I promise you, I'm working on it.

Haha, no problem. I'm always insanely happy when I get a review, too
Good luck with your writing I'll be waiting patiently.

Wow that was really cool. I really liked it =]

Woohoo!! Another review!! lol I'm glad you liked it!! More to come!!

@Phoenix - Thanks. I'll try my best to deliver.

Great! You're good at this ya know.

Nightchild wrote:

Great! You're good at this ya know.

I can't tell you how great it is to hear that.

Nightchild wrote:

Great! You're good at this ya know.

I agree. Your writing is really good.
Hey, would you check out my story? It's under Fan Art and Fiction, too, the topic Fine Lines. I would appreciate your opinion.

dimkaluv I just read your fanfic called It Only Hurts and it was great! I loved it. It was really sad so I cried. I have to say, I have always loved Eddie 'cause he's just so loveable but now I love im even more!!!

I read I Hear Your Voice and I left you a review on fanfic.net. It's a beautiful story. I wish you would continue it.

I just read It Only Hurts. One word - amazing. I left you a more detailed review on fanfiction.net

I read I Hear Your Voice and it was really beautiful as Phoenix said. I think it was great!!

It's really great to hear so much love for those old fics. Thank you guys so much!! I'm very glad that you liked them!!

I probably won't continue with them for now because I'm more focused on my OC fic atm. But if that ever changes and I write another chapter for either of these, you'll be the first to know.

Great =] My favourite was It Only Hurts 'cause it was really sad and sweet. I love Eddie!

dimkaluv wrote:

It's really great to hear so much love for those old fics. Thank you guys so much!! I'm very glad that you liked them!!

I probably won't continue with them for now because I'm more focused on my OC fic atm. But if that ever changes and I write another chapter for either of these, you'll be the first to know.

So when do we learn more about Eden's family and whose side of the family did Crawford belong to?

You find out more about Eden's past and family history later on. Some of it is in chapter 2, so some of that backstory is coming very soon.

dimkaluv wrote:

You find out more about Eden's past and family history later on. Some of it is in chapter 2, so some of that backstory is coming very soon.

I honestly cannot wait, once ch. 2 is released.
So that aside, when will everyone load up on Disturbed when the trials start?

I love your story Ash. I'm very jealous of your writing skills

Cool Tony!! I'm glad you're excited for it!!

lol Kim, I'm just happy to hear you're not bored to death already. I really don't think I could do this without you. Or I could, but it wouldn't be that great.

dimkaluv wrote:

Cool Tony!! I'm glad you're excited for it!!

lol Kim, I'm just happy to hear you're not bored to death already. I really don't think I could do this without you. Or I could, but it wouldn't be that great.

So any luck on the later chapters, as of yet?
Do i have to load up on Disturbed to be epic, while awaiting the news? ^_^

Tonystark616 wrote:

So any luck on the later chapters, as of yet?
Do i have to load up on Disturbed to be epic, while awaiting the news? ^_^

Monday I'll be posting ch2, whether ch3 is done or not.

So it looks like its only a matter of time before we finally get to learn more about Maks, correct?

Yes Tony, you'll get to learn more about Maks very soon.

I'm even hard at work at chapter 3, and am finding that I have a new character!!

Anyway, I was bored and thought it'd be fun to give you guys a sneak peek at what's coming next.

Spoiler:

dimkaluv wrote:

Yes Tony, you'll get to learn more about Maks very soon.

I'm even hard at work at chapter 3, and am finding that I have a new character!!

Anyway, I was bored and thought it'd be fun to give you guys a sneak peek at what's coming next.

Spoiler:

I cannot wait to see whom the new cast member for this spin-off epic will be like, Ashley. ^_^
We need a Looney-Tunes esque moment!