im writing a vampire story. come read it=]

hello my names mei and im writing to storys. oe a vampire one and the other is a real life one. but im only going to put up my vampire one because the other one is to long. well here it is so if you like it tell me and ill put more on but if noone says that they want more then i wont put more on. its as simpily as that so here it is=] enjoy=]

It’s a vampire story
The pain was like being stabbed with a thousand knives right into my heart.

“Dimitri!” I heard myself shout at the top of my voice, also heavy with pain and fright.

A soft, “shhhhhhhhh,” came from my left ear, the most gentle and mesmerising voice then told me, “There’s nothing to fear, love. I'm here, I will protect you. Nothing will harm you ever, ever again in my presence.” His voice was only a whisper but my hearing had increased immensely so I heard the next thing very well, “welcome to your new life my love,” then the magical laugh I knew too well came to his full and delicious lips.

Then, right at that point in time, my memory crashed back into me.

"Emma, Emma, oh my gosh, it’s a fucking zoo in there, why don't you come in and enjoy yourself for once, come on please,” she gave me the cheesy smile that only she could wear. Then she grabbed my arm and pulled me into the party of one of the most famous teenagers at Lawrence high, which made this one of the biggest parties of the year. And Talia (short for Natalia) and I were oh so lucky to be there.

“No, Talia, it’s too crowded in there, I’ll get way too claustrophobic.” But she always won me over.

By the end of the night I had seven hook ups and given my cell phone number out to around about nine guys and now I'm totally wasted.

As I was starting my eighth hook up of the night I felt a slight tap on my shoulder. It was Talia. Her face was full of pain with tears falling down her chubby and baby like cheeks. “Oh my god, what happened?” I said slowly easing my way off of what’s his face that I was sitting on.

“Nothing. Just leave it. I’ll tell you later. Can we just go please,” she said in her cute but hurt baby voice.

So I left it for now but I knew I was going to get it off of her sooner or later.

Once we got outside I breathed a sigh of relief. It was so nice to get out of that place.

We started to walk home but I said, “Talia, come this way, I found a short cut.” So just like normal she followed without question.

As we were walking I suddenly remembered then asked, “So why did we have to leave?” but when I looked over at her she wasn’t there. “Hey, Talia, where’d you go?” that’s when I saw the man. He was just standing there steering straight at me. “Hey, um, did you see a young blonde? Around my height? Really pretty?”

“I'm sorry, my dear, I did not see a young girl with you,” he replied.

“Um, ha, ok?”

Suddenly he stepped into the light, now I could get a good look at him. But for some reason my memory was really fuzzy at that time and I couldn’t see him at all. So he turned out to be one big bluer.

I stepped back as he stepped forward. I didn’t feel like being raped tonight. But right then, so fast I didn’t see him move, he grabbed me by the shoulders and then kissed me fiercely. I nearly fell but he had put his arms around me and was holding me up right. I tried to push him away but he was too strong. Then, finally, he pulled away just as the pain sprung up. It was coming from the side of my neck then went away just as fast as it came. It was replaced with a pleasure so intense I didn’t feel myself falling then hit the ground. When I woke up I was in my bed, and that's when I meet Dimitri.

Back in the present I was still lying on my bed in agonising pain while Dimitri held me in him large, strong arms, on my bed. He stroked the hair that was sticking to my sweaty face while sing my song he wrote for me in his home language. He comes from the whales. Mmm... My sexy Whelsh guy.

I suddenly heard a huge thud and the pain was gone.

“It’s finished your more alive than you have ever been before,” Dimitri whispered in my ear. He then sat up and got off of the bed and went to the corner of my dark and closed off room.

It should have made sense what he was talking about but I had no Idea. Was he talking about the pain, the intense and most excruciating pain I had ever felt? I had no idea so I asked. “What are you talking about? I'm sorry but obviously I'm missing out on something really good so spit it out, what are you on about?”

He looked at my, looking dazed and confused. He also did that thing were you tilt your head to the side when you get really confused, I found it cute whenever he did it. Then realisation set in to his factual features, “you have no recollection of what's has happened in the past twenty four hours have you?” I shook my head. I loved it when he talked all proper. “Well then I have some explaining to do, don't I?” and there it was again, the one laugh I could never forget. “Do you remember what I am?” it seemed ridiculous what he had just asked but his face was dead serious.

“Cause you’re a human,” I said pretty sure I was dead right until I looked into his eyes, “aren’t you?” I then asked. He then took about 2 steps and he was at my bed side while it would take me about four.

it was pretty good. i like the dimitri thing. you should defitely post more.

aw thanx, i have a little bit more but i havent writen much so i cant put down any more, but i will keep it updated if u like=]

yeah u defintelly should its good.

thanx and if u look at my pic lol i drew that. i love to draw and now someone wants me to draw lissa with angel wings=]

i'll give this a read tomorrow with my morning coffee.

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thanx and if u look at my pic lol i drew that. i love to draw and now someone wants me to draw lissa with angel wings=]

I can guess that is tony. LOL.

okey pokey=] hope u enjoy

What i liked most was the bite- u didnt outright say it like most stories do. it was very implicit yet still clear. I like things like that because it leaves more for the imagination. Instead of just explaining what a bite does ( painful at first then taken over by endorphins ) we experience it. I think it was a little jumpy and i have oddles of questions. But maybe I just need to read more. I like it. Post more.

Dimka'nRozaluvwillast4eva wrote:

thanx and if u look at my pic lol i drew that. i love to draw and now someone wants me to draw lissa with angel wings=]

lol the pic is cute.

hehe thanx guys. ask anything you want. um my pic lol i drew that and heeps more =] yea i like to draw manga and design fashion lol =]

this isnt much but its all that i have done 2day, my stupid keybord is acting up so i dont have the patence to rite much, sorry=[

He took my chin in his huge strong hands and held it steady.

“Emma, I am no longer a human, I haven’t been a human for five hundred years now,” his face was hard but it had a hint of compassion in it.

I felt the confusion come over my face. What the hell was he on about? He looked like a human, his skin didn’t have any fur on it, so he couldn’t have been an animal, and he couldn’t have been some sort of hairless one either. I mean seriously, have you ever seen a hairless animal that looked like a human? Well I haven’t, that's for sure.

Something suddenly dawned on me. Did he say five hundred years? Once he realised I wasn’t going to say anything more he continued, “Emma, sweet heart, I am a vampire.”

A harsh laugh came to my lips. “You think you’re a vampire?” I said in a very harsh tone.

“Um, I don't think, I know for a fact that I am a vampire and now you are too,” he then kissed me on the forehead.

And that's when another memory came crashing back into me.

After Dimitri found me lying on the ground dyeing of blood loss we became inseparable while we searched the country for any sign of Talia. But unfortunately, Talia had vanished off of the face of the earth; well that's what it seemed like.

About two months after that night, we had rented a flat for a couple of weeks while we searched this part of the country.

It was a dark stormy night when I suddenly saw the scar on his left hand. It was a circle, but with a darker crescent moon in the middle.

“Oh my gosh!” I exclaimed, and then I grabbed his hand so I could have a better look. Yep it was exactly as I have said it was before, a circle with a crescent moon in it.

He suddenly got harsh and pulled his hand away sharply. His nails sliced through my bear skin like sharp scissors to paper. “Ah,” I mumbled as I took a better look at the gash. Yep certainly a gash.

Dimitri quickly got up and ran gracefully to the kitchen and two seconds later re-emerged with a handful on paper towels. He strode so quickly and peacefully over to me and rapped my hand up. He had a strange face on, it looked like he was battling with himself deep inside but I didn’t understand why. I was watching him as he whipped away the blood. Suddenly he paused and only looked at me hands and the blood that was still pawing out of the gash.

“Emma...” he said without meeting my eyes.

“Yes?” he was hesitating, and that was not like him.

“We have to talk.” He said still not looking at me, instead, he rapped up my hand and sat back down in the same place as before but he sat further away from me now.

“About what?”

“Well, there are things... that I haven't told you about... me,” there was huge hesitation now and I was getting worried.

“Hey, you know you can tell me anything, right?” I tried to move closer but he moved further away.

“Well, I'm sorry I have never told you this, but I didn’t realise how much I love you until this very moment, don't mistake what I am saying, I've always loved you, I knew I would as soon as I looked into those deep, friendly brown eyes, that I would love you until the end of time, but I didn’t realise just how much that love could grow, but now I do and this is the time. I have to tell you about me, all about me now, not tomorrow, not next week, now.” He now had a solemn look on his face. He then looked me in the eyes and put his strong hand under my chin so that I could only look at him, he was too strong for me to pull away, not that I wanted to, his touch was mesmerising.

“Dimitri... what are you talking about, your starting to scare me...” I held a very concerned mask on my face.

“Emma I am no longer a human... I am a creature of the night... a vampire as you may call us,” he was looking me straight in the eyes, but yet not at me at all, like he was looking into the past, his memories.

I felt my face shift from concerned girlfriend to... anger? Was I angry at him?

I said it before I realised, “you think you’re a vampire... like Dracula?”

“Well... yes I do, have you not noticed anything different about me? I haven’t needed to shave and my hair hasn’t grown at all. That's what the scar is about, it’s kind of like how vampires are supposedly pail white-“ that wasn’t true if what he was saying was true because he have a beautiful bronze colour to his skin, it seems to glow in the sun “- and can’t go into the sun or have fangs and sleep in coffins... well the vampires I know aren’t pail white and they can go out in sun light, they do have fangs but there are no coffins. I have fangs; have you ever noticed how sometimes when we are closed and I may look like I'm in pain?” I nodded, “well that's because I am, I feel pain whenever we are very close, I feel a deep desire to kiss you but... but I am to strong, I don't want to harm you Emma, but with my strength and my speed and all of my extra abilities that in some ways can be a fantastic thing to behold but in others... let’s just say it can become very dangerous for you to be anywhere near me at times, but I try to contain myself. Emma, I love you too much to have anything bad happen to you. If you got hurt in my presence, I don't know what I would do.” He suddenly stood up and went to the bathroom.

This is my only chance. I thought to myself. If I don't say something now, I may lose him forever.

“Dimitri!” I called after him, “Dimitri, I don't care what you are, as long as you never, ever leave me, then I'm fine with anything.”

I stopped at the door; he turned and looked straight in to my eyes. I loved it when he did that, because he's not looking at anything else, only me, it’s like I'm the only thing in the world that matters to him, but then suddenly, something cold and nasty appeared out of nowhere and I cringed away for his gaze.

“You don't understand, and you never will... unless...” and then the warmth was back. He took one long step to me and wrapped his long and strong arms around me, “unless you agree to become... like me,” He said, a dangerous and sexy smile on his face.

“When you say ‘like you’ are you referring to the vampire part?” I said with a sceptical mask on my face.

He laughed, and it felt as if the whole word stopped, “of cause I'm referring to the vampire part, what part would I be referring to?” he asked, still wearing a smile.

“I don't know... you could of ment the guy part. You might have wanted me to have a sex change...” I felt my face flush scarlet red, and I refused to meet his gaze.

He laughed again, and again, the world stood still. “Um... no I don't want you to be a ‘guy’ like me, I would never do this with a ‘guy’” he said, then he pulled me up in his arms and sat me on the bed. And before I could say anything father, he kissed me. Sure I had kissed heaps of other guys in my time, but this wasn’t any random hook up, this was me and Dimitri, my sexy, godlike, kickass Whelsh guy.

He push his body onto mine, forcing me to lie down. One of his hands slowly slide down my waste, underneath my back and pulled my chest into his. With his other hands he moved up my waste, and under my neck, still pushing me towards him. It was like... he couldn’t get enough of me, like I was the only thing on earth that he's ever wanted and now that he's got it, he needs more and more but it’s never enough.

We kissed like that for so long I lost count of minutes, I was to mesmerised in his touch, and the feel of his hands go under my top... but when he tried to talk off my undies I pulled away. I didn’t want to lose my virginity at this moment in time, I mean, Dimitri and I had only spent a couple of months together, I didn’t really know a whole lot about him.

But before I saw his response I was back in the present, and Dimitri was searching my eyes, looking for a sign, any sign that I was ok.

“Emma? Emma are you ok? Emma?” His voice heavy with worry.

“Um... yeah... I'm ok, I'm fine,” I smiled, then stud up so fast I didn’t realise I had moved.

“Hey, not so fast,” he says with a smile.

As I stud there I suddenly felt a slight sting on my left hand, I looked and looked and looked but I couldn’t decipher what it was, I knew it was a scar but... where did it come from. I looked up at Dimitri with a puzzled look on my face.

His smile widened as he walked over to where I stud, “it’s our scar, remember? I told you about them. When you become one of us, you get the privilege of having a... hmm... how would you put it? A... cool scar. Yep that's the word,” he said, taking my hand and kissing me on the cheek. He then looked back at me, “what's wrong, my dear?” and just at that moment my tummy rumbled, “ah, I see now, you’re hungry, aren’t you?” my face flushed scarlet red, and ducked my head in shame, “ it’s ok darling, its normal to want to eat after you’ve only just been changed.

this is my lates stuff =] enjoy=]

Its getting better. I love Dimitri.

i love him too, im going onto the next chapter now so yeah haha, hope you enjoy that too=]

Lawl.
Im Like your Number 1 Fan!

lol yay i have a fan hahaha, ill try and get it done, the next chapter, but its the holidays and yeah, its a little differcult at the moment=]

Its cool as long as dimitri is in it. ;]

hell yea, no more team edward(stoner) or team jacob(hes still hot) its only team DIMITRI, gota love him

Hehe Edward can rot Down there.
Taylor is hot tho...;]
But yes Forever Team Dimitri.

you said it sister, well this is the start of the next chapter=] enjoy

Chapter 2
He led me out of the apartment that we were staying in while in New Mexico, we had finished looking all through America, but still no sign of Talia.

Outside of our apartment, we went to the woods that were just over the road from us.

I heard my tummy rumble again and flush scarlet red.

“There is no reason to be ashamed that you are hungry, my dear. Even I get hungry after two or three days of mot eating,” he said while squeezing my head in his, as a human that would have hurt or even broken the bone but nothing, no pain, just... the sense that he's there, holding my hand and squeezing it hard enough that it would have broken but it didn’t.

Then suddenly, what he just said registered and I said, “Two or three days did you say?” I could hear the alarm in my voice.

But all he did was laugh. It was musical, enchanting, and powerful; I would have gone to the end of the earth and back to hear that laugh.

Unlike usual I didn’t have any problem with keeping up with him, normally I would be way back behind him, especially in a forest like this. Ok sure, I grow up in the country, in the bush, but ever since coming to the city I have lost everything that I gained and learnt throughout my childhood, so this normally would have been very difficult but I was finding it easy, maybe it was a part of the change or maybe the change has awaken the playful, friendly child in me. Well, I didn’t know but I'm now thinking that anything is possible.

Off to a good start.
i loved when she said she would go back just to hear his laugh.

well it is the most magical laugh shes ever heared, or will ever hear in that matter lol but thatnx=]

haha Yw. ^^ Can't wait to read the rest.

ill get right onto that lol. do u have msn???

Sweet. actually i don't.