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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeMon Feb 14, 2011 4:08 pm

Ha! that was so cool. You have to keep it up though, Tati. I need to know where Sora was. Why wasn't he with the rest of the pack? Ah Jeeze, you better write fast!!! ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeTue Feb 15, 2011 10:43 am

Lol, Gabrielle.... *smiles shaking my head* I'll try, I am writing the next one already. Razz Just be patient! Lol Razz Smile Very Happy Razz
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Yeah but I need to know what happens to Raven... Wink
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where is Tania? Geez
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeTue Apr 19, 2011 9:00 am

Here I am! lol

Part 35
When I came to, I heard the sounds of animals fighting. I was disoriented and I could barely keep my eyes open to see what was going on. I felt that I was lying on my side on something damp and sorta musty scented. I tried sitting up, but the world wobbled and blurred.
Looking up, I saw two wolves standing a few feet in front of me in a protective posture. Both of them I recognized, but when another wolf came to stand beside Sora, I immediately knew who it was: Karyn.
She was smaller than Sora and Dustin, but she looked able to defend herself. Her coat was a light gray color and seemed slightly shaggier than Sora’s and Dustin’s. After I realized who the wolves were, and sensing their tension and protective line in front of me; all the recent events came back to me.
I was in Romania because me and Dustin were looking for Sora and got ourselves in a confrontation with their parents and a few others. I got overwhelmed and fainted, which made me lose my balance on Dustin and apparently, I fell.
Trying to stand up again, the world swayed slightly, but I managed it. When I started to move, that’s when everything when silent and Sora, Dustin and Karyn turned to look at me. A nervous tremor went through me and I hesitantly took a step back. Sora ran off into the brush, and Dustin and Karyn moved to close off the gap that Sora had left when he went into the forest. That’s when all Hell broke loose.
All the growling, snarling and howling started up again. The other wolves started coming closer to us and we slowly stepped back; which left me further back from Karyn and Dustin and closer to the greenery of the forest. It took seconds for me to be almost behind the brush of the wilderness, but by the time I was further away from Dustin and Karyn, I heard someone or something running from the side…coming at me.
Dustin and Karyn turned around and started running towards me, but whoever was running at me, they got to me before they could even move five steps. I was pinned and a blood-curdling scream came out as a snarling wolf bared his teeth at me. I kicked him, trying to get free, but all it did was make him angrier. I took one last look into the forest where Sora disappeared, and as I did, I said the only words I wanted him to hear at these last moments.
“Sora…I love you…Sora…” I whispered. As the wolf leaned in closer to finish me, I closed my eyes knowing there was nothing left that I could do…
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeTue Apr 19, 2011 9:00 am

Part 36
Accepting my soon-to-come death was not something I wanted to do, but it was the only thing I could do. Sora was gone, Dustin and Karyn were too far away to reach me, and this giant wolf was the only thing that held my life…or so I thought.
After a few seconds from when I told Sora I loved him, an ear splitting howl stopped the wolf that pinned me down and he glanced over his shoulder to look at the forest just in time to see Sora running towards us. I cringed a little and faltered just before I curled up into a ball and had my arms over my head.
The wolf started backing away from me, but it was too late. Sora jumped him and pushed him closer to his brother. Dustin started fighting the other wolf, snarling and trying to rip each others’ throats out. It horrified me, but a movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention.
Looking up, I saw Sora moving closer to me. He nudged my side with his nose and I giggled. Then, he looked up at the clearing and bared his teeth, a low growl building up in his chest. Looking over to the clearing, I saw what made him grow angry: the other wolves were coming our way.
He looked at me and whined a little, trying to nudge me up. I got up and swayed slightly and he moved so that I fell into him. He got down and I knew he wanted me to get on him.
Moving as fast as I could, I got on him in an awkward way. Clutching his fur in my hands, he slowly rose and stood directly facing the other wolves. Dustin finished off the other wolf that Sora shoved toward him and the wolf stayed down. The rest of the pack looked at us, the little group that was about to be taken down…or so I thought.
The pack enclosed the two leaders (Sora’s parents) so that they could shift back. I heard the sounds of them shifting and then, a few seconds later, the wolves that gathered around them moved away and out stepped Sora’s….parents…
Sora whined a little, but other than that, he kept his composer. Dustin and Karyn stepped a few feet behind Sora but stayed at his flanks. A while passed before I heard his dad speak.
“Why did you come back and bring it with you?” it sounded like he was growling, but I couldn’t tell.
Sora, Dustin and Karyn all growled at their father, but it was Sora who moved. Instead of moving towards his father though, he sat down on the ground and shifted slightly. Before getting off him, I brushed my lips against his fur and whispered, “Don’t do anything stupid…well, stupider, okay?” since he was in wolf form, the only answer I got from him was a huff which meant he understood.
Getting off him, I landed on the ground with a barely audible brush of the ground. Sora started to leave and go back into the cover of the forest. Just as Sora disappeared; Dustin got down and I got on him slightly more lithely than when I was panicking while getting on Sora.
I listened outward to where Sora was, I heard the faint brush of the ground beneath him as he changed. The whole time though, his parents just kept staring at me, mostly, the rest of the pack was looking at Dustin and Karyn with…regret, remorse? I couldn’t tell, but there was something in their eyes that looked…sad.
After a few seconds, I finally heard the sounds of someone in the forest moving. I tugged on Dustin’s fur a little and he huffed getting down so I could get off him. Just as my feet touched the ground, Sora came into view and he walked over to stand beside me. Dustin stayed on my left as Karyn came over to stand on the other side of me.
Wrapping his arms around me, Sora said, “She’s not an it, she’s a she and this is my girlfriend.” After those last words left his mouth, I felt it as my breath caught and my heart fluttered. I rested more easily in the comfort of his arms and his breath against my neck.
I closed my eyes as a soft breeze blew my hair around a little and breathed in Sora’s scent. I missed him so much, and finally, I was in his arms. It was like I could finally breathe again, like I was dead or dying the past few days. But now, with Sora here, with me…I could be happy again.
Now, his mom spoke up, “Sora, darling…we love you and your brother and sister, now please…step away from the Impral.” She sounded so sweet…how could something sweet be so…dangerous?
I heard Dustin and Karyn growl while Sora held his ground…until I heard him say, “I’m not going anywhere, I’m staying with her. And apparently so is Dustin and Karyn.” The way his voice sounded…it was so cold…I shuddered and he tightened his arms around me in comfort.
I tightened my hand around his and bit my lip staring at his parents. They seemed so wonderful…how could they hate us so much. As far as our history goes, they attacked the vampires first, but thinking of Sora, and how sweet he is with me…I’m not sure. Lately, I’ve been questioning everything we are taught in places similar to McArthur Academy. Well, I’ll soon find out…if I’m alive that long….
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Part 37
Everything seemed to spin slightly…and I kept getting dragged in and out of darkness. I knew I was going to black out soon, so right before I did, I looked at Sora and kissed him before fading completely into the sweet feeling of sleep.

Sleeping comfortably for the first time, when I awoke, I didn’t know what helped dream peacefully for once. I didn’t open my eyes when I first woke up because I didn’t see light behind my eyelids, so I assumed it was still night. Using my other senses, I felt someone’s arm draped around my waist, and smelt Sora’s familiar scent that was intoxicating to me.
I guess I wasn’t doing much of a good job in acting like I was still asleep, because Sora brushed his lips against my forehead and used his arm around my waist to pull me closer to him. His hand slowly trailed down my spine and he whispered, “Good morning, dear” into my ear. I smiled a little and opened m eyes.
When I looked at him, he seemed to glow with a faint violet light that seemed to embrace him. It made him even more gorgeous. I stared at those crystal blue eyes for the first time in what seemed like an eternity. Oh yeah, and did I mention that werewolves aren’t all that bad…well…depending on the situation. Realizing this, something else came to mind.
“Oh my God…” I said jerking myself upright in bed. “Last night…what happened? Where am I? Is anyone else hurt? Where is everyone??” my words flowed too fast for even me to understand, but Sora understood perfectly.
“Everyone is okay.” He said, sitting up also. “Mom and Dad aren’t too happy, but…” he shrugged.
Okay, for one thing, having a werewolf boyfriend was pretty cool. Another thing, people tend not to fuck with you…much. But when it comes to parents? Yeah, it is gonna be an all out war in Hell.
Feeling his fingers running down my thigh brought me back from my pondering. I looked at him biting my lip, but he was too busy watching his fingers trailing down my thigh to notice my reaction. I bit my lip with slightly more pressure and he smiled a little.
“What’s so funny?” I asked, trying to calm down and ignore the heat coursing through me.
“Mmm…nothing, just…thinking, is all.” I stared at him, but tensed slightly when he started to move his hand back up my thigh, which made him smile even more. My thoughts were running wild, and I could just imagine him kissing me again and possibly so much more…and that’s when he chuckled a little.
“Okay, something is definitely up, and you’re going to tell me what it is…” I said to him and trembled slightly wondering if he’d get enraged and attack me in his wolf form. After I thought of this, he frowned, which made me wonder, and then, something clicked in my dysfunctional mind. “You can read my thoughts!” I accused him and glared.
He chuckled again, “And now, she finally knows.” Smiling, he kissed me, but I pulled away, making him give me a look of concern. “What’s wrong?”
I kept staring at him. “You could read my mind, this whole time without me knowing, and you didn’t bother to tell me?...” I looked away, my hands trembling slightly. I clutched my fists together to stop it from showing, not that it mattered at this point now that I knew Sora can get past my stupid dysfunctional barrier. Which made me question, do werewolves get extra abilities and not just enhanced senses.
“Yes,” Sora said to me. I looked up at him, my face sort of blank. He sighed, “Yes, we do get extra abilities amongst our strengthened senses.”
“Oh,” was all I could manage to say. He sighed again, but it was in frustration, not just for me not understanding quite well.
“Look, I’m sorry I didn’t tell you…it’s just something I don’t think so highly about.” He said, looking at his hand still on my thigh. I bite my lip wondering what he was thinking about, but, of course, things don’t always come to you when you ask.
I sighed shaking my head, “I’m sorry…I’m just only used to Mel being able to read my mind…not you or even Claude. It just seems…weird, you know?” I asked, looking at him.
He seemed to need to think about his response before he could talk. “Yes, but still. I should have told you about it when you didn’t notice, but…I liked the fact that I could listen to what you were thinking without you knowing because you didn’t even know I could listen to what you were thinking…you didn’t hide anything, you just thought about whatever came to your mind…” his voice trailed off at that last part.
I sighed and wrapped my arms around his neck. “Look, I didn’t mean to go off on you about it…I just…don’t like my thoughts being totally out there…especially with you…it’s, well…and irritability for me.”
He nodded in understanding and then, he kissed my forehead. I giggled softly, which was always what I did whenever he kissed my forehead or the top of my head. I moved myself closer to him and kissed him on the lips, tangling my fingers in his hair. He groaned a bit, wrapping his arms around my waist.
When we finally broke apart, he stared at me, and I stared back, both of us breathing heavily. He loosened his hold around my waist and slowly trailed his hands up my sides and I shuddered lightly. He looked at me and gently pushed me back down on the bed and hovered over me so that I could feel him on me, but felt none of his weight.
Slowly, he leaned down and kissed me and oddly enough, my hands found their way at the edge of his shirt and started pushing it up his stomach. He groaned a little and helped me pull off his shirt. I giggled and placed my hands on his chest closing my eyes to feel and hear his heart beat. I smiled at how sweet it felt and sounded, beating faster than normal.
I saw something that reminded me of an animal flash in those beautiful blue eyes, and he grabbed my wrists pinning me to the bed. I bit my lip and looked up at him. For me, looking into those eyes…I felt like I could see into the source of his very essence…and as he looked at me, I felt he could too. He smiled and I looked at him wondering what he thought was funny—and then I remembered he could read my mind.
He chuckled and brought his lips down on mine fiercely, and it startled me. But after the shock faded, I wrapped one of my legs around him and kissed back. He groaned again, sliding one of his hands down my arm, past my hip and then down my leg.
Usually, he stopped us before things could get passed me taking off his shirt, but this time was different. He kept kissing me, kept moving closer to me, kept pulling me closer. It wasn’t until I felt his fingers at the top of my shorts that I pulled away to breathe. With that little reaction, I stared up at Sora, heart pounding, and my body radiant and burning with lust…I wondered if I’d finally experience sex for the first time.
But just when a small sound escaped my lips, boom! Someone slammed the door to Sora’s room open, and along with that person came a sort of blinding light that showered in from the hall. Sora and I broke apart and instinctively I grabbed his soft pitch black blanket to cover myself with it (even though I wasn’t even partially undressed, but it still felt awkward).
Speaking of awkward…the person who interrupted Sora and I was his father…well this is just wonderful. Now this would make another reason for Sora’s friends and family to kill me…just perfect, ugh.
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeTue Apr 19, 2011 9:44 pm

Ha! That last chapter was funny. Having a parent walk in on you is always fun ^///^ I like who you have the mother being sweet but dangerious and the father being cool and protective. I also thought the 'fight' scene was written well too. Can't wait to read more, Tati.
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeWed Apr 20, 2011 7:15 am

Lol, Gabrielle, thing is, I still gotta write Part 38, sorry Razz Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeThu Apr 21, 2011 4:21 pm

TATI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't know you were writing a fan fic
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 11:28 pm

Uhmm....Rhia....I've been writing this one since December...It's about...it's about me and Shea practically...my character is Raven...Shea's character is, of course, Sora... Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 5:36 am

Oh...........I feel kinda stupid know and I just started writting a fan fic called "Feather in the Smoke" and that's about my made up character Cleite and Adrian
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 12:37 pm

Rhia, don't feel stupid. You are smart, young and beautiful, and don't you ever forget that. But age doesn't matter, neither does the physical part of a person. What's inside them emotionally and personality wise is what's most important.

And, yeah...I'm considering on not finishing this, but Travis is encouraging me to because I've worked so hard on this for too long and he doesn't want it going to waste. After this, I'm thinking of making Blood Fued: Cries of Ghosts (the title of the second book needs a lot of work, would you please help me?) and in it, I'll add my Travie in there.
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 2:45 pm

Tani you're starting to sound like my school councilor, and I'd love to help you with the name of your fan fic
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 3:11 pm

"Counselor" and, thank you, I take that as a compliment. If becoming an author like Richelle Mead doesn't work out, I'll consider becoming a psychiatrist.
Anyways, what do you think the second title should be called? And, just curious, have you read the whole story I've written so far?
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 4:08 pm

I think you would be a great author and that you would hate being a psychiatrist, and no I've only read the first couple pages
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 4:10 pm

Okies...
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 4:17 pm

mmm..........I wonder.....Tani what about "Blood Feud:Cries from Beyond"?
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSat Apr 23, 2011 11:31 pm

That sounds...nice. And I might just add my crisis to it. Although, now adding Travie as an angel will no longer happen....
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PostSubject: Re: Blood Fued   Blood Fued - Page 4 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 24, 2011 5:49 am

Tani, don't torture yourself with Travis, he didn't deserve you
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Maybe...but he treated me with love and respect, even in public...that's something I've never had before...and then that screw up and now I lost my faith and trust in him...
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Tani, forgive and forget and live and let live, he's just a boy, and he'll come to his senses so just give him some space to cool off and remember the best things about what you two had and then start off fresh by being friends
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Okay....
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Just stay close to your friends for now and the people you trust
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People I trust other than you guys on here: Shea, Taco, Chris, Teddy and my sister.
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