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Chapter 1
The Hunt
”What the hell are you doing?” Emily said to Justin. “STOP! NOW!” Emily yelled. “Don’t worry we are both vampires here”. Justin said. “And I’m a little hungry”. “When are Kyle and Tyler supposed to be here? I am so bored”. Emily replied.
Ding Dong! “Finally you both are here”. Justin and Emily said at the exact same time as Justin opens the door to his house. “I know”. Kyle stated. “It would have been faster but Tyler took forever on his fangs to make them whiter. “What? My fangs were pinkish before I bleached them”. Tyler replied a little harshly. “All bark and no bite”. Said Emily. Everyone started laughing except for Tyler who was sitting there pouting. “Yeah! Its not like you are good looking or anything”. Replied Justin. “OK that’s enough”. Shouted Tyler. “Fine.” Acknowledging Kyle.
“When are we going to get some food”? Asking Emily. “In about thirteen minutes.” Stating Justin. “I can’t wait to sink my teeth into a big juicy human. Just thinking about it makes my stomach growl”. Replied Tyler. As night came the four vampires rushed out of Justin’s house and with their super speed they rushed to the portal to were they can go to the human realm were they can feast and get away with it. These aren’t your normal vampire creeps. They were born with the blood in them. There about fifteen thousand years old give or take some. Vampires age one year for every one hundred years they are alive. They all stay young by feasting from humans and living off of there blood.
“Yes, I see the portal strait ahead”. Emily shouted. Emily is a young woman vampire that has a kind heart and is all about art. She lives and breathes it. Taylor loves the color red because it is the color of blood. Her main power is the power to make all of her drawings comes to life. “Damn! It is all backed up”. Growled Justin. Justin is a vampire that is not that smart but what he lacks in brains he gains in bronze. When he is angry get out of his way. He thrives of the color black because he loves darkness.” I’m not waiting all night for blood”. Groaned Tyler.
Tyler is a smart vampire who is not that strong but he is more powerful in the brain and he can think himself out of anything literally his main power is being able to control anything with his mind. His favorite color is yellow and orange because they are the colors of the sun.
” Man I can smell it all” Kyle said with a smile on his face. Kyle is a strong and smart vampire who just wants to become a normal kid or just wants to become human. His main power is to make anything appear out of nowhere. His favorite color is blue because it is the color of the ocean.
“Lets just jump over them all into the portal.” Tyler said smartly. “Sure lets do it” Mumbled Emily. Emily does not like the portal because it makes her feel un-easy. “On the count of three we jump” Shouting Kyle. “ONE! TWO! THREE! JUMP!”. They were on a crazy journey not knowing of the blood lusting along the way. Leaving the world of Vampirica.
Chapter 2
The Journey
When they reached solid ground Emily began to feel sick. She went over to a bush and vomited. “I’m okay guys I will catch up later just go on without me.” Emily said with a grumble. “Okay well hurry up” Justin began to shout. “Yeah hurry” Tyler shouted. When they began walking along they spotted a group of humans.
“Guys we should hide in the bushes and wait for Emily.” Kyle stated. “Fine.” Said Justin. “Okay, I am back!” Emily yelled. “Lets go” Tyler said out of hunger. They rushed off to the group of humans and began to feed on them and after they were done the humans looked like they were completely dried out. They rushed to a near by family, and dried them out as well. They went in buildings and dried up all the humans.
They only killed young adults and adults because there blood was full of nutrition and delight.
They hid the bodies and burned them they had a good place because they have been hunting for over three thousand years in human times by them selves and they were the perfect team.
Justin the strong one. Emily the creative one. Kyle the sensitive one. And Tyler the brainy one. They were the perfect match with each other.
As they continued there hunt they came over a group of vampires much, much older than they were. “What’s a couple of young ones like you doing in a place like this? Oh and the names Mortikus.” Asked the vampire Mortikus. “This is my crew” “Hi” Tyler said very curiously. “ Sup”
Justin stated. “What are you doing?” “We are just on the hunt for little vampires.” Mortikus declared. “What makes you think you can suck us dry” Yelled Emily. “Yeah” Kyle said shortly after.
The vampires got into a huge battle. They were evenly matched. Justin on Mortikus, Emily, Kyle, and Tyler on each one of Mortikuses gang. “I’m going to kill you and suck you dry, Mortikus.” Justin said a little harshly. “Now DIE!” Justin cried. “NO!” Shouted Mortikus. “YOU!” In a blink of an eye Justin was holding Mortikuses heart with his hand and his arm trough Mortikuses chest. Justin plunged his fangs deep within Mortikuses neck and sucked him dry.
“What do we do with his gang?” Tyler asked. Justin said. “You should manipulate them and you three drink up.” That’s just what Tyler did. “MMM! Who knew that drinking from another vampire could be real good?” Emily said with aw. “I know.” Stated Kyle.
As they began looking for a place to rest for a bit they noticed they were the only vampires in the human city. Normally they can sense thousands of vampires but there were none. “Can you guys sense any vampires” Taylor asked. “No” Justin said looking at Kyle. “No, just you.” Kyle said looking at Tyler. “I can’t even sense anyone.” He said with a shocked face. “What do we do?” Emily asked Tyler. “For once in my life, I don’t know.” Tyler said slowly and quietly. “I DON’T KNOW!” Now Tyler was completely scared out of his mind. “I don’t know.” “I don’t know.” He just repeated it over and over again in his head. “Snap out of it.” Kyle began slapping his face. “Thanks Kyle, I needed that.” Tyler said astounded.
As they began walking they ran into a group of humans they were old, probably just getting done with bingo. “Hello” One of the old women said. “Hi” Emily said with a big grin on her face. “Lets suck them dry.” Justin said curiously. “I’ve always wanted to taste and see how an old person tasted. “ Justin whispered. “Sure” Emily stated. “Why not” Tyler said very happily.” “No.” Kyle said with a shout. “Why not?” Justin said with a growl. “There almost dead” Kyle said very low like. “Do it or you WILL die!” Justin said. “Fine.”
They walked up to the old people and one of the old woman who thought they were about to mug them so she pulled out some mace and sprayed Justin right in the eyes. “Get them. Save the mace one for me while I recover.” Justin said in pain.
After Justin was done recovering, he began drinking from the woman. ‘That’s what you get but to bad you tasted like dirt.” Justin said out of vengeance. “Yeah you said it” Emily said. “We should have listened to Kyle” Tyler said with regret. “See, I told you so” Kyle said.
They began to walk to the portal when they got to were the portal was, it was gone. “What do we do?” Justin asked Tyler calmly. “I Don’t Know.” He replied shortly after. “If the sun comes up were toast literally” Kyle said a little worried. “I think we should hide in like a building.” Stated Emily. As they walked along they ran into three slayers. “Go along. I can handle the three slayers.” Justin Growled. “But, you could die.” Emily said with tears in her eyes. “I have to avenge my parents.” He said. “Ok.” Emily started to cry. She began to run off. “Good going.” Tyler said with a smirk. “I said go.” As Justin punched Tyler in the face. “Come on, Tyler.” Kyle said with a sincere face. “Sorry Justin.” He stated. “Now go” Justin growled at both of them.
The slayers began to take out there weapons. “Which one of you killed my parents?” Justin asked. “And you are?” the slayer at the front asked. “I’m Justin, who killed my parents?” He asked again. “What do you mean?” The slayer asked. “ A year ago my parents were killed by slayers. They were hunting like I am now, and a lone slayer killed them. I vowed that any slayer I find I will kill them and drink them dry.” Justin said with tears in his eyes. “I have no clue what you’re talking about.” The slayer in the front replied. “Yeah.” The one to the right said shortly after. “Ok” the left one said. “Like I said, I’m going to kill you.” Justin said growling. “Bring it on.” The leader of the slayer group said. They got into a huge battle, Justin got stabbed five times before he killed the top slayers men.
“It’s down to you and me.” Justin said with a little smile. “I’m going to stab you in the heart and then gut you.” The slayer groaned. Justin ran at him with his super vampire speed, and he ripped the slayers head off of the neck blood shot all over him. He was severally wounded. He began drinking. You could here the slurping. He did this for his parents.
As he met up with Emily, Kyle, and Tyler he was passing out. As he found them he fell to the ground. The sun started coming up, as they saw Justin the saw the sun. They saw the smoke coming from his body.
Emily rushed out and retrieved him, when she got back her skin was slightly smoking as well. They found a bucket ant then Kyle ran to a pond near by and got some water to pour on Justin, Emily, and himself.
Twenty minuets later, Justin came through. “Huh, what happened to me? I just remember blacking out when I saw the sun.” He faintly said. When he got up, he staggered a little bit. “You saw the sun?” Tyler acknowledged. “What did it look like?” He said shortly after. “Yes, and it was terrible!” He said cursing under his breath. “I never want to experience anything like that ever again.” Emily said. “What time is it?” Kyle said. “It is about six.” Tyler said after Kyle was finished.” Word of advice how about we get some sleep.” Taylor said in a worried voice. The four vampires in there time of great sorrows fell asleep.
Chapter 3
The Cave
It was close to midnight as the four vampires awoke to such a horrible screech. “It is coming from the cave right over there guys.” Emily whispered. “We should go check it out.” Justin responded shortly after. ” Can we at least eat first?” asked Tyler and Kyle at the exact same time. “We will eat along the way.” Justin said in a harsh tone. When they were half way there they saw a couple and drank from them. Soon after they just rushed to the noise when they got there they saw a cave. When they went into the cave it was all high-tech. Tyler was amazed. “Wow!” he replied. As they walked down the isles they saw all these bats in different containers. The more they walked the more the bats and containers got bigger, at the end of the hallway they saw a giant container broken with blood all over the container and the ground. The container had to be about nine feet tall and twelve foot wide. They all looked in the container and they saw a dead creature. “It has to be a bat.” Tyler assumed trying not to puke. SCREECH. “What in the world was that?” Kyle said in a shocked voice.
They rushed to the noise and there were three fully alive bat demons. They were all about human sized. The creatures lunged at the four vampires. “Its time to do our thing.” Justin said to his companions. So he lunged up to the bat with his super speed and strength and put a whole strait through the bats chest and plunged it to the other side of the room with a THACK! As soon as the being hit the wall it got back up. ” That should have killed him.” Kyle said. “Split up on them. Emily and Tyler take on one of the others I have got the one I just punched. Kyle gets the other one.” Justin commanded. Justin rushed over to the bat and tore its head of. It just layed limp on the ground. “Justin nothing will kill these guy.” Kyle said in a stony voice. “Rip there heads off. It will do the trick.” He shouted. As soon as he commanded them to do so they all killed the bats. “If your so hungry there’s breakfast.” Justin said. As he started to drink the blood from his opponent he said “This tastes like vampire. Why?” he was wondering this for the longest time when he realized he was stronger at everything. Hearing, smell, sight, taste, and strength. He was also stronger, faster, and smarter. “Sweet! You all should drink it makes you better in everything. This was the happiest any of them have seen Justin and they knew it had to make them better. They all started to drink ant the felt the same feelings as Justin. “Help us” they all heard in the distance. With there newly found powers it only took them a few seconds to get them to the cry of help. When they got there they saw Justin’s parents. “Mom, Dad? Is it really you?” he said with tears in his eyes. “Yes, it is us Justin. We’ve missed you.” His dad said. “Why didn’t u tell me u were alive?” he said more angry than sad. “We didn’t want you to get hurt” his Dad stated. Yyyyyyyaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. They all heard. “What is that?” Justin’s mom asked in a frightened voice. “Those are the bat demons that we just drank from and got this amazing power. They have tremendous power and these bright red eyes. There fangs are huge and their wingspan is even huger in an estimation I would say the wingspan id almost 15 feet. The muscles are big to.” Emily stated in almost perfect description. The now six vampires ran from the building. “I will catch up in a little bit.” Tyler said rushing back to the building. He went to the master computer and started moving wires and hard drives around then set the computer thirty seconds back. He rushed out of the building as fast as he could and caught up to his friends who were now resting when all of a sudden they heard a huge boom when they looked at Tyler they saw an array of different colors, there were reds, blues, greens, black, and there were bits of bats every which way. “ What did you do Tyler?” Kyle asked in aw. “Well I just turned the computers in to a bomb and set it to blow in thirty second just in case the bats got lose so we don’t have anymore to deal with.” He stated heroically. “Wow. You finally got something right for once.” Justin said. They all traveled to a near by inn. “What are we going to do now ?” asked Kyle. “Well it is almost sun-up so we should get some rest and find a cave or something. Ordered Justin.
The group of vampires rushed to find a place to stay in were the son wont get them. They hurried into a near-by town and climbed into an abandoned house. The house was mixed mashed colors of blue and pink, Justin being a person who likes all black was pissed to be seen in the house even though it was only his friends and family. Shortly after all the worrying he fell asleep. He had the weirdest dream of a girl who will betray him but soon he will tell his feelings for her to her face and she will love him for who she is even though she killed one of his friends.
The group of vampires woke to a crackling sound. It had been raining all night, the only person still asleep was Justin who was a heavy sleeper. He was deep in his dream he had no clue who he was dreaming of but he liked it. He was sweating all over, whatever the dream was about it was full of sorrow and hate, love and despair.
Justin woke up fast. His dream turned into a nightmare. “What happened?” Emily asked. “Nothing. It was nothing.” He replied. “When did it start raining?” he asked. His mother replied “A few hours ago.”