An Insight Into Me

As I promised Raven. I would post a few poems. Keep in mind. They may not be lovely, but they're true.

Title: To My Father
Fifteen years ago today
I was born
And you were there
The pictures I have of us then
Seem to tell a story
And the story says
You were proud to call me your daughter
That I was your beautiful baby girl
So what happened?
When you and mom divorced
You still could've seen me
But you didn't
You waited 12 years later
Why?
You say it was because I would understand more
I've understood this since I was six
You say it was so I'd have a choice
I would've had one either way
And then when I say I'm not ready
You cut off all communications so I couldn't talk to you
Where's the pride from your first born now?
Do you even care that I'm fifteen today?
Written: July 20, 2010

That's it for now. What do you think?

omg it's really good sad but good I like it alot full of emotion

Thanks Raven. I agree it is sad. Sad and angry.

I enjoyed your poem. Emotions and written word mixed well for a heartfelt poem.

Thank you Tasha.

I agree with Tasha and Raven. It's good and full of emotion which makes the best poems imo.

Thank you.