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PostSubject: a little something i wanted to break off of VA   a little something i wanted to break off of VA Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 10:21 pm

a whole new story with a old face but a new one as well...
about thee person first....



NAME: Anglica bellamorta lezro.


Mother & Father:unknown

AGE:17

made:/born: 1992

breed:rare..(unknown)


BIO- WELL YOU KNOW MY NAME BUT MY LIFE YOU KNOW NOTHING.... when i was born i was born into a life ive never knew.. not knowing who my mom and dad is. having powers im not sure thats to harm me or to harm others...
i can go into sun light... i have a odd birth mark above and around my eye... Right now i am being watched by a "good" teacher his name is master belikov.
He says im a half breed and i have to kill and harm people called moroi. to drink their blood. He has tought me many things. but this life idk it doesnt seem right. but it's all i know how to do..
i feel alone. me and my master are always on the run... we are looking for his old lover, rose hathaway is her name i think... he won't tell me why or anything.. he shuts me out.. sometimes he is opened up with me and he tells me of his old life. other times he is distanced... im not sure why he wants me to follow but it beats being alone...
I can eat human food but blood makes me stronger... i am 25% moroi 25% dhamp 50% strogi....
thats what belikov says.... He tells me what i am but i don't understand why i am or why im alone...
He says im not and that he is here for me but i know he is not, he will be leaveing me for his little "roza"..
i think i might have gotten attached to him but i hope i am wrong... it's wrong just wrong wrong.. but you can say he is the only one i have left...
so why blame me...
i was born to be evil, a rare breed of my own kind. i have a heart that beats. i can love people. i can think. i can breath.
i even age. but maybe there could be more people like me just maybe..... welcome to my life...

MAGIC: i have fast speed. i have the power to push people at my own will... i work with water, fire, earth and spirit.
learning day by day to use it.but it has affects on me.. the more i use it i get drained.. thats why i drink the blood of people.
ok... now ill begin.


CH 1-



It wasn't the storm that woke me up it was the feeling, the feeling of being alone. I was alone.
Maybe i should be use to it but i can.t...
He was gone and what i mean by he, I mean dimitri my teacher. He is the only one I can be myself around even though he is heartless... well soul less... but who was I to talk about being evil,
im one of the monsters the only one of my kind..
A mix between a strogi and a moroi.. it's horri-.
" sorry i was out thinking." belikov said in a flat voice as he walked from the back tunnel.
i sighed.
"get some rest we have a long night coming."he walked towards the side of the cave and sat.
"yes sir" i repled back but i still watched him... he always looks so lost... he had a great life before the change now look.
i see nothing but a black bottomless well.
"im sorry about everyting that has happend" i said trying to confort.
he just looked away.
" im just trying to help" i was mad now and my voice in a higher octive.
"look i like my life. i have now ok im stronger. you have loads of powers i could even dream about and you whine and hide. such a waste." he yelled.
"oh. im not like your toy rose am i huh? i bet she wouldn't whine now would sh-." i couldnt even finish. he ran at super speed at hit me so hard i hit the side of the cave like a broken doll.. blood seeped from my forhead.. he walked up to me and got face to face nose to nose.
"you know nothing of roza don't speak about her"he said in a tight voice and snarled.
i tried not to wheep or show weakness all i could do is look in his deep red eyes and see emptyness.
i wanted to wrap my arms around him i know it's wrong. he doesnt love me or want me so i looked away.
"sorry master." thats all i could get past the now blood that was coming up my throat.
he didnt say anything just got up and walked away. picked up his cowboy novel.
that we got from a target at 4 in the morning. i had to get him one. because we didnt want to cause a sceen.
afterwards we found a box boy behind the building smoking .. and feed.
not wanting to get on the gores... to many images play in my head.
I layed back down to the palet i made.
of course dimitri doesn't sleep.
i tried not to look at him. but of course i lost the battle.
he was siting at the other side of the cave indain style and looking thoughtfuly at his book lips pursed.
he was beautiful....
what does this rose have that i don't i except his new side she doesn't.
i mental cursed inside muy head of course its cause im a mut..
born with the blackest hair.
hair like the moon casting off the ocean.
i mean my body was just fine i mean sure i have extra curves but i have a manly built to me.
but still curves...
i kept my thoughts at bay and took my teachers advice.
deep sleep came soon after wards and the face of dimitri to follow.


so tell me what you think
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PostSubject: Re: a little something i wanted to break off of VA   a little something i wanted to break off of VA Icon_minitimeThu Apr 01, 2010 1:03 am

angel,
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then- in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life- was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.

Edgar Allan Poe
this seems like it just fits this girl in this book.
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i like it.keep posting more!
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PostSubject: Re: a little something i wanted to break off of VA   a little something i wanted to break off of VA Icon_minitimeWed Aug 25, 2010 12:17 am

It's good, I'd keep going if I were you. I like the style it has, how'd you come up with the 'half breed' idea? It's really good.
[quote] i am 25% moroi 25% dhamp 50% strogi....
I really liked that,
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