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 Diamond of Mirannis

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Should I write my book in a first person POV, or a limited third person POV?
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Sunset Rust

Sunset Rust


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PostSubject: Diamond of Mirannis   Diamond of Mirannis Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 5:14 am

It's my original work that I started (and ended) last June. I didn't get to finish it because of school work and important stuff. Schedule kicks in and then my writing of the story is hindered from doing so. I really hated it...

But anyway, it's about adventurers from the modern world who got shipwrecked and landed on the Kingdom of Berithnia, the most powerful of all Gavierus Islands. I really missed writing those stories...

Here are the links:
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Yeah, I only finished until chapter 2.

Also, I have a poll attached just to get your opinion. You might want to read my story before voting. I'm just not sure what style should I write my new story though.
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Peace love n VA

Peace love n VA


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PostSubject: Re: Diamond of Mirannis   Diamond of Mirannis Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 10:28 am

ello. I will give this a read a little later on. Got loads of assignments to do. But you expect a comment from me in the near future. I will vote after i read ur story but on a general note- writing in third is ALOT harder than writing in first person What are you comfortable doing? I personally like to read first person most of the time- but depending on the story sometimes third person is best. I'll comment again after i read.
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PostSubject: Re: Diamond of Mirannis   Diamond of Mirannis Icon_minitimeSat Jan 16, 2010 4:06 pm

I was looking everywhere for this! sorry for the lateness. do u mind if i copy and paste into Microsoft word to read it? Promise to delete after its read. Its just easier for my eyes on microsoft where i can make the font larger lol. I'll wait for your yah or nay.
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