hello Richelle, my name is mei (may), im 14 and i come from new zealand, im writing a vampire story my self and an ever day story. lol my friends say that im such a great story but thats not really up to me so... theres what ive writen already. haha sorry about the name, i got it from va, sorry i just love dimitri so much. tell me if you want me to change it or not k? It’s a vampire story
The pain was like being stabbed with a thousand knives right into my heart.
“Dimitri!” I heard myself shout at the top of my voice, also heavy with pain and fright.
A soft, “shhhhhhhhh,” came from my left ear, the most gentle and mesmerising voice then told me, “There’s nothing to fear, love. I'm here, I will protect you. Nothing will harm you ever, ever again in my presence.” His voice was only a whisper but my hearing had increased immensely so I heard the next thing very well, “welcome to your new life my love,” then the magical laugh I knew too well came to his full and delicious lips.
Then, right at that point in time, my memory crashed back into me.
“Kayla, Kayla, oh my gosh, it’s a fucking zoo in there, why don't you come in and enjoy yourself for once, come on please,” she gave me the cheesy smile that only she could wear. Then she grabbed my arm and pulled me into the party of one of the most famous teenagers at Lawrence high, which made this one of the biggest parties of the year. And Talia (short for Natalia) and I were oh so lucky to be there.
“No Talia, it’s too crowded in there, I’ll get way too claustrophobic.” But she always won me over.
By the end of the night I had seven hook ups and given my cell phone number out to around about nine guys and now I'm totally wasted.
As I was starting my eighth hook up of the night I felt a slight tap on my shoulder. It was Talia. Her face was full of pain with tears falling down her chubby and baby like cheeks. “Oh my god, what happened?” I said slowly easing my way off of what’s his face that I was sitting on.
“Nothing. Just leave it. I’ll tell you later. Can we just go please,” she said in her cute but hurt baby voice.
So I left it for now but I knew I was going to get it off of her sooner or later.
Once we got outside I breathed a sigh of relief. It was so nice to get out of that place.
We started to walk home but I said, “Talia, come this way, I found a short cut.” So just like normal she followed without question.
As we were walking I suddenly remembered then asked, “So why did we have to leave?” but when I looked over at her she wasn’t there. “Hey, Talia, where’d you go?” that’s when I saw the man. He was just standing there steering straight at me. “Hey, um, did you see a young blonde? Around my height? Really pretty?”
“I'm sorry, my dear, I did not see a young girl with you,” he replied.
“Um, ha, ok?”
Suddenly he stepped into the light, now I could get a good look at him. But for some reason my memory was really fuzzy at that time and I couldn’t see him at all. So he turned out to be one big bluer.
I stepped back as he stepped forward. I didn’t feel like being raped tonight. But right then, so fast I didn’t see him move, he grabbed me by the shoulders and then kissed me fiercely. I nearly fell but he had put his arms around me and was holding me up right. I tried to push him away but he was too strong. Then, finally, he pulled away just as the pain sprung up. It was coming from the side of my neck then went away just as fast as it came. It was replaced with a pleasure so intense I didn’t feel myself falling then hit the ground. When I woke up I was in my bed, and that's when I met Dimitri.
Back in the present I was still lying on my bed in agonising pain while Dimitri held me in him large, strong arms, on my bed. He stroked the hair that was sticking to my sweaty face while sing my song he wrote for me in his home language. He comes from the whales. Mmm... My sexy Whelsh guy.
I suddenly heard a huge thud and the pain was gone.
“It’s finished your more alive than you have ever been before,” Dimitri whispered in my ear. He then sat up and got off of the bed and went to the corner of my dark and closed off room.
if any one that has read this would like to read more u can contact me at
oquamei@hotmail.com , this is my email. just email me and i will send everything i write =]
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